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Chapter 1 OstracizedChapter 1

A young, innocent yet confused boy was wandering in a remote forest. He looked weak, beaten up, and tired, it has been two days since he was expelled from his hometown. He was driven out of the city for an unknown, painful reason. Even the boy himself had no idea why the people in his city expelled him. He couldn't find a single shelter to rest in, he grew tired and lost. But he continued on wandering in the forest until he was too exhausted. He sat by a tree and looked at the cloudy sky. He predicted that it would rain. Later, he decided to take a nap before moving on. Suddenly, he heard someone singing and saw a shadow of a pers

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Vocaloids Ryan and Lireby *NatsumeHirai

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Contest Entry for :iconryanxlire: "Duet" contest.


Grand Chase, Lire, Ryan © KOG
Rin and Len Kagamine © Vocaloid
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~VenomousBlaze Nov 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hello.

I'm one of the judges for the RyanXLire Duet contest.
Would you mind if I write a critique for this pic? After all, it's my job as a judge.

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The background is vibrant, the colors are vibrant, and the poses are awesome. The bright oranges and yellows are perfect for the pic, and the facial expressions are so damn epic.

But, you're no different from :iconmayuro: when it comes to concept and design. Besides, like what I've said before, the anatomy is seriously flawed.

I would like to be frank with you this time.

For originality, you get a 1.5 out of 5. For Artistic style, you score a 2.5/5...and finally, for epicness...you got a pretty neutral score...3.5/5...

EPIC FAIL. Nice try, but not good enough. and I do believe that you can become better as you practice.
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~Treeonice Nov 9, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
OMFG *dies* Epic crossover~~
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*NatsumeHirai Nov 10, 2010
Thanks~
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~Mayuro Nov 4, 2010
aw, they're so cute! but man, i was going to do them dressed as rin and len too! Dx
i think i'm going to change it now... Dx
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*NatsumeHirai Nov 5, 2010
It's okay! Just do it! :3
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~gmLEN Nov 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
awwwww so cute :3
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*NatsumeHirai Nov 4, 2010
Thank you. ^^ Any entries already? :3
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~gmLEN Nov 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
hmm.. bale tatlo lang kayo.. huhuhu D: walang interested.. lulz .. though okay lang yun saakin.. hahaha
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*NatsumeHirai Nov 4, 2010
Lol. Ganun ba? xD
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~gmLEN Nov 4, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
opo.. haha :3
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